Many a mickle makes a muckle Monday
- Thread starter Nancy
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My Mum is coming to stay next week for a couple of days. It will be the first time she’s seen my apartment so I am determined to make it super nice for her.
Can’t wait for her to come to stay. Bridges are most definitely being rebuilt.
Can’t wait for her to come to stay. Bridges are most definitely being rebuilt.
Berly
Lost and lonely what!
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That’s a bit milestone Nance, she will have a wonderful time.
So it seems I’ve gone a little bit viral on the TikTok in the last 24 hours. I did a video about volunteering at the donation sorting centre and it’s got like nearly 10,000 views and loads of comments
So it seems I’ve gone a little bit viral on the TikTok in the last 24 hours. I did a video about volunteering at the donation sorting centre and it’s got like nearly 10,000 views and loads of comments
Rachey
A little bit lesbian
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Hi moopy
We (the fudge shop) have poached a member of the reception vet team where I used to work, and where Mandy now works. The girl has just handed her notice in and it's not going down too well. I think Mandy may end up getting into an argument.
I'm very pleased I no longer work there.
We (the fudge shop) have poached a member of the reception vet team where I used to work, and where Mandy now works. The girl has just handed her notice in and it's not going down too well. I think Mandy may end up getting into an argument.
I'm very pleased I no longer work there.
Kate
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Loving lockdown ending and Moopy realising all the ASFM songs are real living artists.
Kate
mildly communist
Going to see Shygirl on Wednesday as well, SO EXCITED!!!! Dorian Electra and Molly Nilsson coming up too.
I’ll be at Dorian though
Indie
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Kate
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Worth trying the DICE waiting list for Shygirl.
WhooOOOoooppp!!! Got the feedback and grading for my first assignment. Am over the moon!
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Grade: A (disctinction)
You have done a good job with this assignment. You wrote the first task to the correct length and fulfilled the brief well. It’s difficult to put everything into 50 words but you succeeded, well done.
Your slogan worked very well, the reader has got to understand it immediately, and I think they would with this one.
Your final piece was very cleverly written. It was exactly what copywriting should be - to the point, accurate and clear. There was no mistake what you were selling nor what your objective was, these are both essential copywriting skills. A great effort. Well done.
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Grade: A (disctinction)
You have done a good job with this assignment. You wrote the first task to the correct length and fulfilled the brief well. It’s difficult to put everything into 50 words but you succeeded, well done.
Your slogan worked very well, the reader has got to understand it immediately, and I think they would with this one.
Your final piece was very cleverly written. It was exactly what copywriting should be - to the point, accurate and clear. There was no mistake what you were selling nor what your objective was, these are both essential copywriting skills. A great effort. Well done.
